Paper #1
“Foreign Athletic Limits”
Grade: B-
Explanation: This paper may have had an ok thesis statement, but there were other sentences that were not complete or wrong. Also there are grammer errors. The author does use sources, however.
Paper #2
“Online College vs. Online High School”
Grade: B-
Explanation: This paper also has an ok thesis. The grammer has some errors as well. The is some commas needed. This paper also has sources used. There is some quotations needed.
Paper #3
“Predisposed to Divorce”
Grade: A-
Explanation: This paper is done really well. There is a good thesis sentence. Also the writer has good sentence structure. The writer uses sources really well. Also the argument was to the point.
Paper #4
“NAACP Case Against Gun Manufacturers”
Grade: C+
Explanation: This essay had no clear thesis sentence. It has some good sentences, but a few could be made better. It has some good use of sources.
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